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留学申请指导服务：提供选校、申请材料准备及申请的全面指导服务。

¥ 10000-19000

中文申请文书写作指导：提供素材选择、结构安排、逻辑关系与潜词造句等方面的全面写作指导。

¥ 199（不超过4次）

中文申请文书修改：客户在确定了中文申请文书的基本内容的基础上，我们会为您进行您所要求的提炼、浓缩、扩展和 / 或发挥等全面的修改工作。

¥ 399-499（不超过4次）
中文申请文书指导 & 修改套餐价。

¥ 599-699（不超过4次）
中文申请文书撰写：所需费用为相应英文文书原价的 30% （ PS 等陈述和短文类）或 35% （推荐信，英文简历等）（英文文书原价为含海戴的美国科学家编辑二审修改润色价， 1word 对应于 1 汉字符）。
 
英文申请文书写作指导：提供素材选择、内容细节、撰写角度、结构安排、过渡、逻辑关系与潜词造句等方面的全面写作指导。

¥ 399-599（每千单词，每2次）

¥ 599-899（每千单词，每3-5次）

  • 注1：根据申请人专业的差异，个人陈述(Personal Statement)的撰写方法大致可以划分为叙述式(Narrative)，分析式(Analytical)和技术式(Technical)三类。叙述式写法的优点是所展开的内容是线性，但是在具体撰写个人陈述等出国留学文书的时候需要注意说明和解释的部分要和有特殊意义的事实相平衡。分析式的写法主要是提问及用具体的事例和细节或小故事来支持回答。技术式写法主要适合于学术背景浓厚的申请人，也适用于有重大经历的申请人。理想的技术式个人陈述或英文短文(English Essays)将会是围绕一个特定的命题而展开的一个小型的报告。个人陈述不等同于个人自传和简单的个人背景介绍，应该侧重于申请人在所申请的领域中已经取得的和将会做出的专业成绩以及相关的扩展问题，包括学业成绩，科研成绩，实践经历，专业认识，学习动机，与所申请专业相关的特殊经历或个人特质，未来明晰的学习与科研计划等。目的陈述(Statement of Purpose)应该以申请人的专业认识、学习动机、未来明晰的学习方向、科研计划，以及未来的职业计划等为重点阐述对象，同时可以较少的篇幅介绍申请人与所申请专业相关的专业成绩、专业准备、特殊经历或个人特质。
  • 注2：留学推荐信可以分为书信体和问答式两种。申请北美的客户一般需要提供三封留学推荐信，最多可以达到四封。申请英国和其它欧洲国家及澳洲的客户一般需要提供两封留学推荐信，最多可以达到四封。留学推荐信最好由知名教授、学者或业内专家提供。推荐人应该说明与被推荐人的熟识程度、被推荐人的学业或学术表现、学习或科研能力、个人特质(Motivation, Perseverance, Dedication, Academic independence, Leadership, Team spirit, Interpersonal Skills, etc.)、成功潜力、语言能力以及与所申请的专业相关的其他素质。
  • 注3：对出国留学申请人来说，一份出色的英文简历可以全方位、多角度的向录取委员会的教授展示自我。留学个人简历不限篇幅。一份优秀的英文简历应该量身定做，应该有个性、结构明晰，重点突出、英文地道流畅，在必要的地方还要具体而详细的说明和展开(Having meat!)。这些都不是一份简单的英文简历模版所成提供和完善的。
  • 注4：对留学申请人来说，Cover Letter类似于Application Checklist，但是又不等同于简单的清单。Cover Letter是所有的申请材料中放在最上面的一份一页纸的英文文书。在Cover Letter中应该按照顺序列明其它的申请材料，说明申请人所提交的所有材料尤其是额外的材料，说明英语考试成绩的寄送情况，是否缺少某些材料，以及何时补充和如何补充等。因为Cover Letter是录取委员会的教授所看的留学申请人的第一份英文材料，所以其地位就显的尤其重要，是留学申请人留给录取委员会良好的第一印象的关键。除了英文要地道和流利外，还应该把申请人最优秀的背景或个人特质概括性的展示出来，使阅读申请的教授们能够立即喜欢上申请人并欣赏申请人。
  • 注5：德国、荷兰及其它北欧的大学入学一般需要写作一份Motivation Letter。动机函应该以求学动机为重点，除了需要具体阐述出国留学、选择该专业以及该校的原因，还需要说明所申请的学位课程如何能促进申请人今后学术和职业的发展，可以涉及学习兴趣及未来的职业计划。

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    海戴出国留学文书金牌编辑撰写原创留学文书，文书完成后由总编进行一审、修改、润色 （全套文书本环节周期：7-10天）
    将50%的文书片段交付给客户
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    海戴交付出国留学文书全文给客户, 同时将留学文书交付给海戴的英语母语编辑审核修改润色. 审核完成后海戴会交付给客户全部二审稿（周期：3-4天）
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  • Small Press Distribution
  • The American Literary Translators Association's Newsletter
  • BIPOC Literary Translators Caucus' September Newsletter
  • Chax Newsletter Fall 2021
  • 人民日报对 A Naturalist's Manor 的报道
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  • 杜琛翻译完成薛云平诗歌集《龙门记》英文版
  • Chen Du's essay "Pick the Right Bus", published by In Parentheses
  • Interview with Chen Du by the Rappahannock Review (the literary journal of the University of Mary Washington)
  • Chen Du's poem "Dust on the Sill", published by the Rappahannock Review (the literary journal of the University of Mary Washington)
  • Chen Du & Xisheng Chen's translation of four poems by Yan An, published by Interim (supported by the English Department at the University of Nevada)
  • Chen Du & Xisheng Chen's translation of three poems by Yan An, published by The Momentist in Ireland
  • Chen Du reading the poem "A Bare-Handed Lightning Catcher" written by Yan An, published by Pilgrimage
  • Chen Du & Xisheng Chen's translation of five poems by Yan An, published by Delos (University of Florida Press)
  • Chen Du & Xisheng Chen's translation of four poems by Yan An, published by Exchanges (The University of Iowa)
  • Chen Du & Xisheng Chen's translation "A Bare-Handed Lightning Catcher", "Rocks Living in a Yonder Homeland" and "Direction of Twilight in Ginkgo Manor", published by Pilgrimage (the literary journal of the Department of English and Foreign Languages at Colorado State University-Pueblo)
  • Chen Du & Xisheng Chen's translation "A Coordinator's Canyon", "Northern Writer", "Those Northern Blue Lakes", "Sleeping With a Mirror", published by AzonaL
  • Chen Du's poem "Crevices of Stars", published by Nebo: A Literary Journal (Arkansas Tech University)
  • Chen Du & Xisheng Chen's translation "City and Its Underground Worker" and "Blue Boy Smuggling Birds’ Nests up the Trees", published by Lunch Ticket Magazine of Antioch University Los Angeles
  • Chen Du & Xisheng Chen's translation "Writing Lyrics for a Rocker at a Subway Passage", "A Man’s Knife Glint, Moonlight and Starshine" and "Moorland Is My Friend", published by The Los Angeles Review
  • Chen Du's article "New interpretation and techniques of transcreation", published by Babel: An International Journal of Translation
  • Chen Du's poems "Set Free" and "War Without Fire", published by San Fedele Press
  • Chen Du & Xisheng Chen's translation "The Beauty of Confrontation" and "A Man With a Dent in His Head", published by Waymark Literary Magazine of Kennesaw State University
  • Chen Du & Xisheng Chen's translation "Demise of the Starry Sky", published by Sinking City of the University of Miami
  • Chen Du & Xisheng Chen's translation "A Bare-Handed Lightning Catcher" and "The Man Digging a Well at the Seashore", published by Anomaly
  • Chen Du's poem "Ingredients of Truth", published by Hamline University English Department
  • Chen Du's translation "How to Observe Dark Clouds Polish Constellations", published by The Festival Review
  • Chen Du's poem "Distance", published by Hamline University English Department
  • Chen Du's poem "If I Were a Pine", published by Hamline University English Department
  • Chen Du's poem "Walls", published by Hamline University English Department
  • Chen Du's translation "Load on My Mind" and "Step into Summer", published by Columbia Journal of Columbia University
  • Chen Du's poetry chapbook "Pilgrimage", published by The Dead Mule
  • Chen Du's essay "Catch the Train", published by Hamline University English Department
  • Chen Du's translation "An Aesthete’s Nails and Hammer", published by River River
  • Chen Du's essay "Catch the Train", published by the Dead Mule
  • Chen Du's translation "The Spring of Rapeseed Flowers", published by Lunch Ticket, Antioch University-Los Angeles
  • Chen Du's poem "I am a Grain of Sand", published by Levitate (The Literary and Art Magazine of the Chicago High School for the Arts)
  • Chen Du's translation "The Loess Plateau in Rainy Days", published by The Bare Life Review
  • Chen Du's book "Successful Personal Statements"
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